Nobody's Listening

Posted: Wednesday, January 10, 2007 by Stained in
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22:30
09/01/07

A plane crash
A shipwreck
A blazing house
An execution
Voiceless death
Slithering in
To take life
All's good

You laugh
You weep
You seek to fathom
You begin to sense
The end
Creeping close
Nothing will remain
Only hate

Feel pain
Feel demented
Feel something
Feel everything
Know you felt it
Got through
Beginning again
Still unchanged

Punching the wall
Punching anything
Punching to bleed
Punching for pain
There is hope
This will heal
Felt something
Still numb inside

A Shooting star
You wish
Feel happiness
Punching heart beat
Galaxy full of stars
Lighting up the sky
But they're too far away
And nobody's listening..

-Stained

Not as impressive compared to the previous two in my opinion. But well wrote it so posting it. :D

3 comments:

  1. The Ego says:
    1/10/2007 04:24:00 pm

    An execution*

    Ummm...you know wot I think abt it... I like it... so yeah...
    The poem ... well ... I don't know how else to say it, but the poem smells of you! :D

  1. Anonymous says:
    1/10/2007 05:13:00 pm

    there is this rawness about the poem that i like..it isn't present in the previous poems..u haven't held yourself back in this one..the previous ones had a facade..this doesn't..

    cheers

  1. Anonymous says:
    1/12/2007 10:47:00 am

    theres sumthng abt this poem..sumthng tht gives it n edge...simple crisp creative without the ostentatious display of complex words...has this feel..this soul..tht sum othrs lack...it was like reading my own thoughts put so completely in words...

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